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Beta 3 - Hint House
#4
16104 - Minor nitpick in text. I think you should be consistent with your pronouns in the text. Spider is referred to as a
he
and an
it
. I think you ought to stick with
it
.
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Beta 3 - Hint House - by RobSeegel - 07-09-2011, 12:28 PM
Re: Beta 3 - Hint House - by RobSeegel - 07-09-2011, 01:43 PM
Re: Beta 3 - Hint House - by RobSeegel - 07-09-2011, 01:45 PM
Re: Beta 3 - Hint House - by RobSeegel - 07-09-2011, 01:46 PM

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