05-25-2010, 09:11 AM
Hard
16694 - Wow - that was really hard. the zappers were pretty close. This was the first place so far in the mansion that gave me serious grief. At this point, I had 11 lives, and I burned through most of them the first time around. Luckily, I'd saved nearby, so I could practice, but still it was a little frustrating. I was incredibly happy that the switch disabled the zappers! Otherwise, I would have intentionally run into one of the zappers intentionally to return to the other side. [Nothing needed here, just my notes. It got better after a little practice.]
16701 - You might consider moving the coins so that they cannot be reached by jumping from the corridor beneath.
16702 - I'm not sure you really need this sign for Hard, perhaps for normal. In any case, the text is a bit awkward, how about:
You might even consider replacing the text with something that fits in better with the other signs from Basano, and not like something out of a tutorial. Maybe something like:
16694 - Wow - that was really hard. the zappers were pretty close. This was the first place so far in the mansion that gave me serious grief. At this point, I had 11 lives, and I burned through most of them the first time around. Luckily, I'd saved nearby, so I could practice, but still it was a little frustrating. I was incredibly happy that the switch disabled the zappers! Otherwise, I would have intentionally run into one of the zappers intentionally to return to the other side. [Nothing needed here, just my notes. It got better after a little practice.]
16701 - You might consider moving the coins so that they cannot be reached by jumping from the corridor beneath.
16702 - I'm not sure you really need this sign for Hard, perhaps for normal. In any case, the text is a bit awkward, how about:
Remember to watch the level above you while you're jumping. There could be a snake, for example, that Jack's head will hit.
You might even consider replacing the text with something that fits in better with the other signs from Basano, and not like something out of a tutorial. Maybe something like:
Be mindful of dangers above while jumping,OR,
Watch your head while jumping to avoid lurking dangersOR even something like:
Welcome visitor to my humble maze, home to several exotic and deadly species. Please feel free to jump as often as you like. There's nothing a venomous snake enjoys more than a good surprise.