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#1
Got the webpage up for MM2:

http://www.actionsoft.com/games/midnightmansion2/

If you have any suggestions for rewording of any Feature points or text description, let me know.
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#2
Well, you say that the bonus mansions are 170 rooms but with the three versions of TC&TC they are more like 350!
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#3
I would suggest after saying
...old abandoned castles, ancient unexplored mountains and more!

And perhaps add one or more of these to the sub-bar under the Mac symbol:

• Brand new weather giving a whole new environment!
• New scary monsters!
• Build your own levels and share them on the MM forums!

I would really stress you to make that 3rd feature I listed known by having it twice on the page, because frankly this enables players to spend the best $20 of their life. Tongue You can get so much gameplay and fun out of it it's not even funny. Tongue
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#4
Vern I'm a graphic designer so I'll give you my opinion about the
look
I think that the page is too much similar to the one for Midnight Mansion 1.
Maybe in this way people could not understand that the game has a lot of new features... What do you think about a black page?


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#5
Nice, margherita!
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#6
Wow margherita, that's really good! It'd take some HTML re-coding of the page, but would likely be worth it.

Any chance you could do a mock-up with the
Buy Now
and
Download
buttons in there? (Instead of
Coming Soon
) I'm using the same page for the final version, just with Coming Soon replace with Buy Now and Download buttons. (From the original MM sales page.)
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#7
Very nice margherita
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#8
Thank you all Smile
Vern, I'll do! No problem
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#9
Hi Vern attached you find the draft page. If you want my psd file feel free to ask me: I'll send you the file.


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#10
Yeah, that would be great. Send the PSD file to vern@actionsoft.com. Thanks!
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