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[Wingy]

Uh oh. In the read-me,

...Midnight Mansion costs $25. To buy teh game visit this link:...

In the FAQ, (taking a screenshot Q)

...3rd party programs may or may not be able to take screeshots in full-screen mode...

In the documentation... (Under selecting a mansion)

...This final mansion is rumored to contain far more treasure...

Is it just me or am I just really Canadian? Keep it as is if that's the way they do it in USA.

In the MMLevel Builder - More Tips:

You said

ResEdit or Resourcer

, since ResEdit has been discontinued since Mac OS X came around, I would suggest saying

Rezilla or Resourcer.

Rezilla is free and a handy tool which I use.

In the Level Builder Docs, Tips for MM2 - Typo:

Under Triggers

...Instead, put tiggers in places where a player will naturally...

Also, in the

Data

Folder in the

icon

view type in the finder (The first one) I would suggest cleaning it up for the final version. Along with the Mansions folder. Just nit-picky stuff.

Additionally, in the /Game Data/Mansions/ folder, there are three text notes for music and whatnot. I would suggest to be gone with them.

Thats about it for non-related game stuff, if you're being picky.

As for other things...

Tutorial:
15896 - Show behind middle vine missing.

Mount Peril Normal:
16303 - This room is meant to be dark.
15902 - Remove the lady bug on the right. It seems too hard on normal, actually.