08-20-2010, 10:48 AM
EASY (Score 43050 - 100% Secrets)
15893 - L6 Issue when Jacks up around 2nd pillar from the left his head can be seen above the lava.
15701 - Nitpick: Stain glass windows look a little odd with a drop shadow behind them. Not a big deal...
15501 - Those stones on top floor look a little strange when Jack jumps up from underneath. Not sure if they add much here.
15100 - I can trigger the creatures on the middle floor from the bottom floor. Probably unintended.
BBB: Consider this instead: These gold coins are cursed! If you want to avoid a terrible fate, jump over them, and don't get too close!
16294 - Drop shadow under stain glass window/mosaic? Looks odd.
16695 - Jack Stuck - Jack pulled the lever on the platform on the left, then jumped off and watched it go up, up, and away. Consider replacing lever/platform with a bat platform that won't leave Jack stranded.
16496 - Ok - I'll stop commenting on the stain glass window drop shadows, and chalk it up to artistic license.
16702 - Kind of a tricky challenge here, too much for easy?
15903 - Was something hidden up here? (lower left corner, jump up) Consider losing L6 there if there is no reason for it.
16104 - Minor L6 Issue, left side, middle floor - stand in the hidden wall and jump up. Consider putting a few more blocks in L6 so you don't see Jack's Head jump above it.
Left side, Bottom floor, ceiling - consider extending L6 to the left a square or two.
Left side, Bottom floor, second pillar from left - consider adding the two blocks where you can see Jack jump through to L6.
Right side, bottom floor, on the far right consider extending L6 in ceiling - it ends abruptly.
16704 - Two small lava tiles in the middle of a rock platform look a little strange. Unintended?
15893 - L6 Issue when Jacks up around 2nd pillar from the left his head can be seen above the lava.
15701 - Nitpick: Stain glass windows look a little odd with a drop shadow behind them. Not a big deal...
15501 - Those stones on top floor look a little strange when Jack jumps up from underneath. Not sure if they add much here.
15100 - I can trigger the creatures on the middle floor from the bottom floor. Probably unintended.
BBB: Consider this instead: These gold coins are cursed! If you want to avoid a terrible fate, jump over them, and don't get too close!
16294 - Drop shadow under stain glass window/mosaic? Looks odd.
16695 - Jack Stuck - Jack pulled the lever on the platform on the left, then jumped off and watched it go up, up, and away. Consider replacing lever/platform with a bat platform that won't leave Jack stranded.
16496 - Ok - I'll stop commenting on the stain glass window drop shadows, and chalk it up to artistic license.
16702 - Kind of a tricky challenge here, too much for easy?
15903 - Was something hidden up here? (lower left corner, jump up) Consider losing L6 there if there is no reason for it.
16104 - Minor L6 Issue, left side, middle floor - stand in the hidden wall and jump up. Consider putting a few more blocks in L6 so you don't see Jack's Head jump above it.
Left side, Bottom floor, ceiling - consider extending L6 to the left a square or two.
Left side, Bottom floor, second pillar from left - consider adding the two blocks where you can see Jack jump through to L6.
Right side, bottom floor, on the far right consider extending L6 in ceiling - it ends abruptly.
16704 - Two small lava tiles in the middle of a rock platform look a little strange. Unintended?