Mansion Comments: The caves and the castle

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4B505D4A4A4154090101380 wrote: BB's  - First room -

Instead of 'try not to dazzle

I think you mean not to stay there very long (dazzle means to be a flashy show-off) so it should be 'try not to dawdle

(means to leave quickly). Also, the last line

who like to eat the braves

doesn't make sense. Do you mean the trolls like to eat the brave adventurers or like to eat the adventuresome or like to eat courageous explorers?
I will be happy to help you with the phrases.
Sherry

Thank you Sherryl. I'd surely like to learn more of your language. Would this work with first rhyme:

Behind the mountains lies a castle.
Try to reach it without a hazzle.
You need to find your way through caves
of trolls who like to eat the knaves.