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Mansion Comments: The caves and the castle
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7B606D7A7A7164393131080 wrote: BB's  - First room -

Instead of 'try not to dazzle
I think you mean not to stay there very long (dazzle means to be a flashy show-off) so it should be 'try not to dawdle
(means to leave quickly). Also, the last line
who like to eat the braves
doesn't make sense. Do you mean the trolls like to eat the brave adventurers or like to eat the adventuresome or like to eat courageous explorers?
I will be happy to help you with the phrases.
Sherry

Hi Sherry,

We all have our forte's when it comes to testing mansions, but you are the best BB tester! Wink
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Re: Mansion Comments: The caves and the castle - by hawaii - 04-11-2010, 03:36 AM

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