Mansion Comments: The caves and the castle

[sherryl199]

BB's - First room -

Instead of 'try not to dazzle

I think you mean not to stay there very long (dazzle means to be a flashy show-off) so it should be 'try not to dawdle

(means to leave quickly). Also, the last line

who like to eat the braves

doesn't make sense. Do you mean the trolls like to eat the brave adventurers or like to eat the adventuresome or like to eat courageous explorers?
I will be happy to help you with the phrases.
Sherry